I suggest we add a picture for each category, Replace ???s with facts and shorten the conclusion.

Ryan,
I suggest that the language in this draft under the heading of "TRANSPORTATION" be replaced with:

2 STANDOUT EXAMPLES

Example No. 1

Since the 1990's IDOT has used fiber optics to monitor and control major signalized intersections. Recent application of broadband technology has allowed IDOT to view real-time video of these locations and other high-accident locations along the State Route and Expressway systems.

BENEFITS: Traffic flow though intersections equiped with dynamic/remotely controled traffic control devices provide for a much smoother movement flow thereby reducing potentials for vehicle-related incidents, congestion and exhaust pollution. Observing high-accident locations in real-time allows for immediate dispatch of emergency response resources and faster site clean-up and restoration of traffic flow.

CONTACT: Mark Kinkade or Louie Midiri, Illinois Department of Transportation

Example No. 2

IDOT deploys and controls closed circuit security systems to detect activities that may threaten the State's highway transportation network.

BENEFITS: Broadband technology allows IDOT, together with various law enforcement organizations, to protect and preserve the safety and continued availability of Illinois highway system for use by all law-abiding motorists. Without continued access to and safe use of this critical State infrastructure, our daily transportation needs and the State's entire economy would be unacceptably altered.

CONTACT: Mark Kinkade or Louie Midiri, Illinois Department of Transportation